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		<title>By: rei</title>
		<link>http://www.soverydark.com/2010/with-my-finger-in-a-duck/comment-page-1/#comment-1690</link>
		<dc:creator>rei</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Feb 2010 16:27:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I get what you are saying, but a movie like Die Hard, though it wouldn&#039;t win any Oscars, is well written/acted/special-effected for the genre it inhabits.  It may not be deep, but it is still a polished and successful final product.  There are plenty of books I read/shows I watch/movies I enjoy that may not have stunned humanity with their profound meaning but that I still enjoy because they have redeeming qualities outside some crappy message.  

I do, however, have certain minimum standards.  I admit that I am rather high on the picky scale when it comes to grammar and word use.  I abhor the repetition of the same word--especially one that is descriptive or in some other way easily variable--and T.G. did this almost constantly.  His word choice in general was also weak...there were countless times that I encountered adjectives that seemed inappropriate and flat.  

Normally, I would be particularly frustrated by the above, as bad writing would distract me from the plot...but in this case, I found the characters to be very obvious and two-dimensional...the only one that really had any depth to speak of was Mistress Denna.  Everyone else was catch-phrases and signature moves.  They felt like cardboard game-pieces moving across a map to rolls of of a die.  

I understand that some people really do enjoy this series, but as far as I am concerned, I find nothing to recommend it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I get what you are saying, but a movie like Die Hard, though it wouldn&#8217;t win any Oscars, is well written/acted/special-effected for the genre it inhabits.  It may not be deep, but it is still a polished and successful final product.  There are plenty of books I read/shows I watch/movies I enjoy that may not have stunned humanity with their profound meaning but that I still enjoy because they have redeeming qualities outside some crappy message.  </p>
<p>I do, however, have certain minimum standards.  I admit that I am rather high on the picky scale when it comes to grammar and word use.  I abhor the repetition of the same word&#8211;especially one that is descriptive or in some other way easily variable&#8211;and T.G. did this almost constantly.  His word choice in general was also weak&#8230;there were countless times that I encountered adjectives that seemed inappropriate and flat.  </p>
<p>Normally, I would be particularly frustrated by the above, as bad writing would distract me from the plot&#8230;but in this case, I found the characters to be very obvious and two-dimensional&#8230;the only one that really had any depth to speak of was Mistress Denna.  Everyone else was catch-phrases and signature moves.  They felt like cardboard game-pieces moving across a map to rolls of of a die.  </p>
<p>I understand that some people really do enjoy this series, but as far as I am concerned, I find nothing to recommend it.</p>
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		<title>By: adam</title>
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		<dc:creator>adam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Feb 2010 01:33:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll be the first to admit that it&#039;s not the BEST written book on the planet. All the things you bring up are an issue, but it&#039;s more of a fast enjoyable ride. By using some cliches and deus ex stuff he keeps one thing going after another, The sheer amount of characters, plots and activities that take place only in the first book is a feat unto itself, especially since it doesn&#039;t leave you wondering what the outcome is. 

TO put it in perspective, I don&#039;t think &quot;Die Hard&quot; is probably a cinematic masterpiece, it&#039;s chock full of generic action scenes and one-liners. But it&#039;s super fun, enjoyable and I&#039;ll keep going back to watch it again. Make sense? 

Adam 

PS: it also gains a bit more pacing and creativity as you go on.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll be the first to admit that it&#8217;s not the BEST written book on the planet. All the things you bring up are an issue, but it&#8217;s more of a fast enjoyable ride. By using some cliches and deus ex stuff he keeps one thing going after another, The sheer amount of characters, plots and activities that take place only in the first book is a feat unto itself, especially since it doesn&#8217;t leave you wondering what the outcome is. </p>
<p>TO put it in perspective, I don&#8217;t think &#8220;Die Hard&#8221; is probably a cinematic masterpiece, it&#8217;s chock full of generic action scenes and one-liners. But it&#8217;s super fun, enjoyable and I&#8217;ll keep going back to watch it again. Make sense? </p>
<p>Adam </p>
<p>PS: it also gains a bit more pacing and creativity as you go on.</p>
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		<title>By: rei</title>
		<link>http://www.soverydark.com/2010/with-my-finger-in-a-duck/comment-page-1/#comment-1686</link>
		<dc:creator>rei</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 22:57:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t know, Adam...what I think I really have a problem with is the fact that the writing is about the same quality as that of a self-gratifying fan-fic written by a 13 year old.  The characters are annoying and unbelievable...gratuitous hugging and post-sensitivity-training &quot;Angel&quot; attitudes aside.  The plot is riddled with Deus ex Machina moments, and half the characters and locales seem to be very thinly disguised rip-offs from other fantasy writers&#039; works...and despite the third person narration, whenever T.G. is writing from the perspective of Princess Violet&#039;s playmate, not only is the dialogue of the girl herself horribly painful (seriously...how many times can a person use the word &quot;bestest&quot; before they DESERVE to be locked in a box?), he tends to slip into the same &#039;child-speak&#039; vernacular in his narration.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t know, Adam&#8230;what I think I really have a problem with is the fact that the writing is about the same quality as that of a self-gratifying fan-fic written by a 13 year old.  The characters are annoying and unbelievable&#8230;gratuitous hugging and post-sensitivity-training &#8220;Angel&#8221; attitudes aside.  The plot is riddled with Deus ex Machina moments, and half the characters and locales seem to be very thinly disguised rip-offs from other fantasy writers&#8217; works&#8230;and despite the third person narration, whenever T.G. is writing from the perspective of Princess Violet&#8217;s playmate, not only is the dialogue of the girl herself horribly painful (seriously&#8230;how many times can a person use the word &#8220;bestest&#8221; before they DESERVE to be locked in a box?), he tends to slip into the same &#8216;child-speak&#8217; vernacular in his narration.</p>
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		<title>By: adam</title>
		<link>http://www.soverydark.com/2010/with-my-finger-in-a-duck/comment-page-1/#comment-1683</link>
		<dc:creator>adam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Feb 2010 00:15:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dude you suck, sword of truth novels are great. Obviously you&#039;re too used to the cynical dark maneuverings of endlessly lame emo-novels. Because I&#039;ve read robin hobb&#039;s books (all of them) and I was say I enjoyed sword of truth immensely more and am in the middle of re-reading all the books. Also Carrie just finished book one and she is totally hooked. 

I can only surmise that you are not aware of the vital difference between quality books and holes in the ground....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dude you suck, sword of truth novels are great. Obviously you&#8217;re too used to the cynical dark maneuverings of endlessly lame emo-novels. Because I&#8217;ve read robin hobb&#8217;s books (all of them) and I was say I enjoyed sword of truth immensely more and am in the middle of re-reading all the books. Also Carrie just finished book one and she is totally hooked. </p>
<p>I can only surmise that you are not aware of the vital difference between quality books and holes in the ground&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Brendan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brendan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Feb 2010 16:54:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think it&#039;s funny that when all is said and done, it will be the PA DMV and not your friends that finally convince you to move back to CA.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think it&#8217;s funny that when all is said and done, it will be the PA DMV and not your friends that finally convince you to move back to CA.</p>
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